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anglais > lycée > test d'entrée en 2e européenne erreurs et extraits de copies
Write two essays (+ or - 125 words each).
1 - If you could travel in time, either in the past or in the future, what year and what country would you choose? Justify and explain your choice.
2 - You have to write an article for the school magazine about top models. One day, you meet one of the most famous models in the world and you question him or her about the positive and negative aspects of the job. Write the dialogue...
corpus d'erreurs ( * = agrammatical)
* that's why I want to discovered it * If I could travel in time, I will choose... * Do you has begun your job very young? * When I was artist, I met a very nice man, called Diego, who tell me... * This job is very hard because we mus standing up very light. * I am a top model since I am twenty three. * It miss me lot because when I was a child I used to eat what I want... * I love too much my job * I love me show before the public * But the most hard thing I have to do... * That Saturday
morning, as I had to write an article * First at school all my
friends founded me so beautiful that they inscribe me
corpus d'expression écrite sujet 1
"If one day, I could travel in time, I think I would go to Egypt at the period called the "New Empire", thousands of years ago. I choose this period because I think it's the golden age of Egypt and I have always loved this civilization. At that time, people were not very rich and they don't have many things for live but there were so many things that I love there that it doesn't matter for me if I would live with nothing. Egyptians people had hundreds of gods for all things, like Anubis for the death people, Thoueris for the pregnant women and some animals were even considered as gods like cats and crocodiles! The Egyptian architecture was very amazing too, and it is famous in the whole world. I love art, so for me, their colums, their drawings and their statues are very interesting and beautiful. I choose Egypt for another reason too, when I was yound, I used to be totally mad about this country, and I wanted to go there, but we didn't do, so, it's still a dream. Even if there was poverty and slaves in this country, the glory and the power of its Kings, and the extraordinary Egyptian art made me choose Egypt."
"If I coul travel anywhere, I'd go in London. I'd go there bacause: first, we could go there with the eurostar and there is any contry who are possibly acces with not fly. I'm afraid of fly!!! Then, in London there is famous monument who any people speak. There is for example Big Ben we say it is very impressionant. There is also the queen who have celebrity 50 years of reign in London. Finally, there is a lot of horses. I love them!!! And if I go there I got 18 years old, because, when I had 18 years I'm not allowed to go with my parents and it's very great. It'll a liberty!!!. That's why I'd go there although it's rain anytime!!!"
"If I could travel in time, I wonder me where go a longtime however I'd prefere go in the future because it's the time what nobody knows. We know the past with the bboks, the paints... that is why I'd choose the futur. the first, I'd want go in the future if I was the first man for teach the futur to other men and why not, in a few time, we will teach, at the school, the future as like a subject. It could interesant, funny and important. I think I will remember me forever."
sujet 2
" - Which aspect of being a model do you prefer? - I really enjoy going on that platform with all those great clothes on, when everybody is looking at you. When you come in front of many people, photographers or other designers. - And which part is the most unpleasant part? - Well, before going on stage, the preparation, there is a lot of pressure, it is really nerve-racking, everybody moves, you have to go to make-up, a woman brushes your hair and everything is tense everybody is really nervous. - And in your everyday life what do you like and dislike? - I love being recognized when I walk in the street. But what I dislike is being followed around by photographers who do not respect my private life."
"Hi! How are you? - I'm fine, thank you. - Ok, so let's go! I have a lot of questions for you! First how did you become a top model? - I passed castings, a lot of castings, and when I was seventeen, a producer has wanted to meet me; but I was not eighteen, I was not able to work! So he was nice, he said me to come back when I am eighteen. - Wow! What a story! And do you like your job? - Yes! I adore it! And I do it not to earn a lot of money but because I love it! - You're very enthusiastic. Then what are the negative aspects of the job? - I can't eat what I want, my weight is always controlled, so sweets and chocolate... I am always travaelling, Somedays, I am twhenty-two or twenty-four hours in a plane, in a car or something like that. - Ok, but we must stop. We've reached the time! - Bye ! - Bye! And thank you!"
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